- Mysteries are Enticing.
- They’re both a Demonstration & a Story.
- And they look complicated to craft.
- Though, all you need is People acting in a simple Time frame.
Summary – 5 steps to Mystery
- Define the Location where the Crime is perpetrated.
- Define a Time Frame.
- Establish the Relationships :
- Victim
- Suspects
- Investigator
- Perpetrator
- Display how the Crime affects the Characters.
- Dispatch the Clues.
- Mysteries should answer 3 Questions :
- Who did it?
- How did they do it?
- Why did they do it?
If you want a full list of the Questions needed to write a Mystery.
Location
- Where is the Building situated?
- Most often crimes will be committed in closed spaces.
- If the Setting is not a Building it still has some spatial Limitations.
- At the latest, the space where the Crime was committed should be define immediately after the Crime.
- All potential Escapes should be identifiable.
- Even if they are only revealed later.
- The space should be relatively Isolated, if only to perform the Interrogation.
- Isolation may be an advantage for the Investigator as well as for the perpetrator.
- The Sources of Energy necessary to aliment the Building should be defined early.
- As well as the Resources available.
- If a Resource is lacking, the Investigation is likely to be slowed or Interrupted.
- Also indicates if there are other Threats in the vicinity of the Building.
- What are its Specificities?
- The Architecture of the Building defines how the Crime was committed.
- A Map of the Building should be available.
- Both the Public & the Characters benefit from a simple representation of the Setting.
- The Structure of the Building should be known by all Characters after the Crime was committed.
- The Structure of the Building indicates how was the Crime perpetrated.
- By its Limitations & the Tools available indoors.
- All Important Rooms should be situated early.
- Important Rooms include :
- The room where the Victim was found.
- The room where the Crime was committed.
- The room where the Weapon was found.
- Rooms where Clues were found.
- Where were you?
- The Location of each suspect within the Building should be known as soon as the Crime is committed.
- The Location of the suspects reveal their Implication in the Victim’s condition.
- The Room in which is suspect is found define fundamental Information.
- Fundamental Information include :
- If one of the Suspect was Alone.
- If they were in direct contact with the Victim before the crime.
- What they intended to do Before & After the crime.
If you want to know more about creating a Location.
Investigation
- Time Frame
- The Investigation needs a specific Time Frame.
- Its Resolution should be Constrained by Time in a consistent fashion.
- Pressure is put on the Investigator.
- Pressure put on her by the Suspects, who wish to quit the place of the Crime.
- Pressure put on her by the Victim’s Relatives, who wish to know the Perpetrator’s identity.
- And potentially pressure from the legitimate Authority if the Investigator is a 3rd party.
- Finally, the Investigator must prevent the Perpetrator’s Escape or Retaliation.
- Pacing is key.
- Prioritize the fastest option.
- And offer the Public & the Characters a clean Time Frame.
- 3 types of Elements should be Time-framed rigorously :
- The Location of each Individual
- The Beginning & End of each Event
- The Discovery of each Clue
- Perspective Shift
- As the Clue appear the Investigator must shift her perspective.
- The Investigator’s Perspective will be defined by her preconceptions of the Crime.
- The Clues should Refine it.
- The Perpetrator’s Perspective is defined by her will to acquire the object of her Want & flee unscathed.
- The Investigator should shift between her perspective & the Perpetrator’s as each new Clue appears.
- Empathy is key to establish a proper Coherence.
- Empathy is essential to establish the Perpetrator’s profile.
- A Perpetrator is not an Individual, it is an avatar.
- A representation of the one commiting the crime.
- The Perpetrator’s profile is established through 3 main Factors :
- Her Needs
- Her Process
- Her Motives
- Investigators
- The Solver is the most likely to Solve the Mystery.
- Her role is to find the Process used by the Perpetrator.
- The Enticer is a player & a facilitator.
- She accelerate the pace by bringing new elements of suggestions.
- The Builder acts as an Expert on the Structure of Location, the Weapon or another Accessory.
- She may validate or invalidate theories based on physical likeliness.
- Advisors question the Solver & Enticer’s deductions.
- They main role is not to offer alternatives.
- They could.
- They should defy deductions & display the Solver & Enticer’s inconsistencies.
If you want to know more about Investigation.
Relationships
- Perpetrator & Victim
- They both share Specific Interests.
- They may share a passion or an intimate relationship.
- The Proximity between the 2 should be established early.
- Even if it is only suggested.
- In the early stage you’ll establish the Perpetrator’s Profile :
- Her Motives,
- Her Skills & Knowledge,
- Her Interests.
- The Perpetrator should be seen as an Entity not an Individual.
- Until her identity is confirmed.
- Victim & Suspects
- The Suspects are linked to the Victim by an Object.
- The Suspects Want something from the Victim.
- The Object they Sought is likely to entice them to commit the Crime.
- The Object may be wanted by multiple persons.
- Hence multiple Suspects.
- The Object may be desired for different reasons.
- And reaching it require to go through a common Obstacle: the Victim.
- There may be other participants not wanting to harm the Victim.
- They do must have a Common Interests with the Victim.
- Any other Suspect can be used as a Scapegoat by the Perpetrator.
- Showdown
- Once the mystery is solved the Perpetrator should be Confronted.
- This Confrontation can take place at any moment, if the Perpetrator chose to reveal herself.
- If the Victim is still alive, she can choose to attack the Perpetrator.
- The Perpetrator may flee.
- There, the story turns into a Chase, where the Investigators go after the Perpetrator.
- The Perpetrator may choose to silence the Characters about to reveal her Identity.
- There the Hunt, where the Perpetrator tracks the Investigator & other potential Suspects/Accomplices.
If you want to know more about Relationships.
Affect & Characters’ Mind state
- Fear & Anxiety
- The Suspect are likely to become Unstable.
- They will be Anxious.
- Of being suspected.
- They try to Escape.
- They’ll throw Accusations at each other out of pure panic.
- Fear will also accumulate.
- Depending on their implication they are likely to be attacked by the Perpetrator.
- Anger & Frustration
- The Suspect are likely to become Aggressive.
- They may Attack the Investigator.
- Either physically or by hurting her reputation & credibility.
- As their Anger grows the Suspects will antagonize each other :
- Through Arguments,
- Fictitious Debates,
- And more Accusations.
- Nonetheless, any of these phrases can be used to hint at the Perpetrator.
- Therefore, the Perpetrator may want to silence Suspects.
- The Investigator is less likely to be afraid of the Perpetrator than the Suspects.
- However her Frustration grows just as much.
- Not being able to solve the mystery is a major cause.
- But the Investigator can also get frustrated because the Perpetrator is attacking one of her relatives.
- How to control the suspects?
- At some point the Suspects should become more Aggressive.
- The Investigator disposes of 4 major ways to influence them.
- She can Threaten them.
- She can make use of Malice.
- And either lie to them by promising them a quick outcome.
- Or even Accuse a Aggressive Suspect.
- She can ask for their individual Cooperation.
- If she has the support of the Legitimate Authority, she can make use of it.
If you want to know more about displaying Character’s Moods.
Clues
- 4 Types of Clues
- Clues can reveal 4 types of Information :
- The Identity of the Perpetrator,
- Her Goal,
- Her Procedure,
- Her Mistakes.
- Clues revealing the Identity
- Clues should allow to identify the Perpetrator.
- They narrow the Suspect’s list.
- By providing the best match.
- They can be Accessories, Clothes or even Direct Messages.
- Correspondences between the Victim & the Suspects are incriminating.
- Identity based Clues determinate the age, the body type, the physical capabilities & Intentions of the Perpetrator.
- Clues revealing the Goal
- These are the most Obvious Clues.
- They should point at the Object Wanted.
- There can be some misleading clues.
- Clues pointing at multiple Suspects simultaneously.
- They should be the Easiest to find as the Goal is the most important information.
- Clues revealing the Process
- The Perpetrator’s Intrusion in the Location is an Abundant source of Clues.
- If the Perpetrator was Invited she still had to break into a specific room.
- The Intrusion in this Room is specific to the room’s structure.
- It indicates the Perpetrator’s Means of execution.
- And the execution of the Crime itself.
- The Perpetrator’s Skills.
- As well as the Knowledge needed.
- Clues revealing the Perpetrator’s Mistakes
- Leaving Clues may be considered as a Mistake on its own.
- It is not.
- Certain Clues are left deliberately.
- Which could ironically cause even more mistakes to happen.
- Precipitation.
- Lack of Focus.
- Emergency.
- And the presence of External Threats.
- All of these are potential sources of mistake for the Perpetrator.