How to create a Gorgeous Antagonist?

  • Is she a Villain?
  • Is she a Nemesis?
  • Here is a process to create your final antagonist.
  • Your Antagonist doesn’t have to be antagonistic to the reader.
  • Your Antagonist can be sympathetic to the reader.
  • What if the Protagonist had the less desirable position through your story?
  • Would you pass onto the Antagonist’s side?
  • Most likely…
  • What about the cast of your story?

Her grandiose Goal, Her nurturing Name

  • Characters begin as Souls.
  • The physical manifestation is 2ndary.
  • Therefore, considerations such as gender, ethnicity or age are irrelevant in the early stages of character creation.
    • Age could matter more than the other 2 for experiences reason or skill honing.
    • But even then your characters could be organized, efficient & focused and therefore develop their potential faster.
    • Teamwork & support from their peers (allies or adversaries) also helps.
  • An Antagonistic soul impresses.
  • It may be rejected or accepted, but an antagonistic soul provokes reactions.
  • An Antagonistic Goal is 1 that will face rejection.
  • It is also a goal that will attract other Souls.
  • The best goals are team-oriented.
  • Being an antagonist does not mean being selfish.
  • Your antagonist needs to take care of her team.
  • The gorgeous antagonist will gather different layers of allies.
  • 1 of them being their family.
  • Her Name will translate her goal.
  • You can also describe her most core personality trait through her name.
  • The place she was created would make a suitable name.
  • This place determined what her life would be.
  • It is in most cases the origin of her goal.
  • Where does she come from?
  • Who raised her?

Her obvious Strength – Charm

Physical
  • If your character can get physical sympathy from both sexes you’ve did it right.
  • Here, it’s not about physical attraction only.
  • The other part of the equation is impersonation.
  • Would it be enjoyable to be with or to be your antagonist?
  • Since it is an Antagonist you will not get full adhesion.
  • However, chances are high that even the part of the public reluctant to admit their attraction to your character may want to impersonate her.
  • Tall & thin will be the obvious choices.
  • Maybe too obvious.
  • Try something not too muscular regardless of the gender.
  • Some level of musculature development may greatly enhance the attractiveness of your female antagonists.
  • Principally at the end of the limbs: forearms & calves.
  • Try 3 different Antagonists morphologies (Slender, Curvaceous & Plump) in the same Trilogy.
  • How many body types do you know?
  • How many body types do you want to use?
  • How many head shapes do you know?
  • How many head shapes do you want to use?
  • Think clear, appealing shapes.
  • Curves does not always mean volume.
  • Balance the levels of right angles & curves in your characters designs.
  • If you have no previous experience with drawing/painting, try to look at George Bridgman’s works on human anatomy & figure drawing.
    • It would greatly help to develop a balanced sense of pose drawing & mannerism in your figures.
  • Try creating simple rounded characters.
  • Pick 3 little animals.
  • Develop 9 characters around them.
  • Pick 3 slender animals.
  • Develop 9 characters around them.
  • Pick 3 large animals.
  • Develop 9 characters around them.
Mental
  • Calm & composed?
  • That’s a way, but the right level of aggressiveness can work even better.
  • A slow, soft antagonist can easily be perceived as entrancing, as a source of security.
  • But a rightfully agressive character, or an ambitious/confident one will act as a straight sword.
  • Which one do you prefer?
  • The Calm, Soft type will be perceived as a threat only latter in the story.
  • Where the Hard, Reactive type can be built as a Rival, allowing you to introduce her in the 1st chapter.
  • Whichever your choice is be sure to show the Antagonist’s management skills, particularity if it is your final antagonist.
  • Your Antagonist leads, even indirectly.
  • If she does not give the orders, she must enroll potent & reliable lieutenants.

Her Strength to Hone – Create relatability

  • Progress, Evolution, Change.
  • This is what your Antagonist strives for.
  • Where does she come from?
  • The Strength you Antagonist wishes to acquire is something she’s missing from an early age.
  • Because she was lacking this Strength she lost a precious thing.
  • Through this loss she realized her powerlessness.
  • Whatever the Lessons she needs to learn, these should be displayed clearly.
  • Her Hopes can be displayed directly through her acts, discourse or manners.
  • They can be displayed indirectly through her acts, discourse or manners of their allies.
  • Who raised her?
  • Was it a family member?
  • Was it a stranger who captured her?
  • With/without her knowing?
  • What did this person promise her?
  • What did this person offer her?
  • Is this character still alive?
  • Will you use her in your Story?
  • What did she teach the Antagonist?
  • What were/is this person’s Strengths?
  • What was/is this person’s Goal?
  • Did she transmit this Goal to the Antagonist?
  • What was their life like?
  • Why did they quit the place they were born?
  • What were the 1st Crisis the Antagonist faced?
  • What were the latter Crisis the Antagonist faced?
  • What were the 1st Crisis the Antagonist caused?
  • What were the latter Crisis the Antagonist caused?

Her obvious Weakness – Ambition

Ambition is the reason why your Antagonist, or your protagonist, may lose.
Taking initiatives & risks is part of your main characters soul.
That’s why they’re the main characters.

Main Character is used indifferently, wherever it is an Antagonist/Protagonist.
It just reveals the level of importance of the Character.

  • An Ambitious character is Built on Want.
  • Want is the result of shortage.
  • The deeper the lack, the stronger the Want.
  • What did your character do to transform their Physical appearance?
  • How will this appearance serve her goal?
  • How can you see her ambition in her accessories?
  • Her Body?
  • How does she display this appearance?
  • Who walks with her?
  • How does she dress usually?
  • On Ceremonies/Celebrations?
  • What did she do to reach her Mental state?
  • Who admires her?
  • How does that affect their actions?
  • How does she speak usually?
  • During tensed situations?
  • To people she dislikes?
  • Where does she come from?
  • What habits did she develop by living in this place?
  • What’s her perspective on the outer world?
  • What Abuses did she face?
  • How Frustrating was the life in this place?
  • How degraded was the place itself?
  • Could she access basic Necessities?
  • Could she fulfill growth-related needs?
  • Who raised her?
  • What Weaknesses did she transmit to the Antagonist?
  • Did she Abuse the Antagonist?
  • What’s the Antagonist perspective on strangers since?
  • How Frustrated this person was?
  • Where did her Frustration came from?
  • Could she fulfill the Antagonist’s basic Necessities?
  • Did it fill her frustration?
  • Did it remember how incapable she was?
  • What was their life like?
  • Did they ever went out for vacation?
  • Where they cloistered in a prison?
  • Was the Antagonist lost this person?
  • Did she quit the place she was born because of this person’s demise?

Hidden Weakness – Enhance relatability

  • Your Antagonist’s hidden nature will unfold in the last chapters of your story.
  • How do you want the public to feel about her?
  • Do you want to public to be Disgusted by your Antagonist?
  • To feel betrayed because at the end they discovered the nature of their goal?
  • To finally feel sympathy/empathy, because they discovered their goal?
  • To feel rightful for hating this discutable Individual for the whole story?
  • To feel regretful/ashamed for hating this relatable Individual for the whole story?
  • How to choose the Hidden Weakness?
  • What’s the 1st Trauma your Antagonist went through?
  • How did it change her?
  • How does she react when it is mentioned?
  • How did she act for preventing people from discovering it?
  • Does she know who knows about it?
  • What’s her relationship to these people?
  • Can she silence them if necessary?
  • The 1st Scar never heals.
  • Capitalize on it.
  • It shouldn’t be the lone reason why your Antagonist is weak though.
  • Find a quirk to enhance the effect of this traumatism.
  • Make it a mundane habit for the character.
  • It can be a favorite dish.
A Silent/Quiet Antagonist
  • How composed is she when it comes to end one’s life?
  • An Animal life.
  • A Human life.
  • How composed is she when death comes for her?

Don’t let her be alone.

  • A gorgeous Antagonist builds her Team around her Goal.
  • She needs advisors, suppliers, motivators, protectors.
  • She needs support from external parties too.
  • Her ability to identify stakeholders, particularly opponents to her goal, is crucial.
  • If she ever needs to adapt her strategy, namely ask for the Protagonists help, she ought to understand who is reliable.
  • She can use people, without harming them.
  • She does not need to hinder to succeed.
  • In acts & manners she must attract.
  • She can even be admired by most of your cast.

I love you.

  • It is the final form of Antagonistic relationship.
  • The moment you decide to develop a Soul/Mind/Flesh relationship between your Antagonists & Protagonists is the moment your story becomes endearing.
  • Your Protagonist will have to face the Antagonist personally.
  • Or choose to flee.
  • The relation does not have to be visible in the early chapters.
  • It doesn’t have to be conclusive, even at the end.
  • It doesn’t even have to be supported by the cast.
    • It could be rejected by every other character, it doesn’t matter.
  • What matters is your Protagonist/Antagonist.
  • It doesn’t have to be straightforward.
  • Even the Antagonist may be unaware at 1st.
  • It can be pointed out by a 3rd party, a member of either team.
  • Or even someone outside the Antagonist’s & the Protagonist’s team.
  • Someone totally oblivious to the situation.
  • This outsider may even want to exploit this unforeseen relationship to destroy both teams.

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